Hey all,
Here are the last two images from my fashion spread for the alumni mag @ the college (see original post below for first four images). Once again, please honestly critique. And thanks so much again for the feedback you've already given. You guys are a great sounding board (or maybe seeing board?)! THANK YOU!
Well, Leslie right off I know which of those two lovely models I would rather have sitting on my lap!
ReplyDeleteThat said, as you know from cerf.book.fr I have a tendency to crop tight, especially for portraits. For the top one I'm of two minds - keep the two knobs in the photo or not. Also I darkened the drawers, especially the one which says "flammable".
The other girl in the pleated robe make a lovely combo but I was distracted by the wires and superstructure. In lightroom I cropped and darkened some of the wires so the girl pops out more. Of course in that dress with a bod like that there are some distractions one cannot get rid of!
I put my take of both up in a private directory on cerf.book.fr in "J" gallery, passworded "josydanse". (That's where I do some shooting when in Paris, like MorganaFata in the "Iberique" gallery)
Nice work and, again, let me express my total jealousy you get to work with clothes and girls like that!
Kudo's, again nicely done. You do have a good eye for this.
ReplyDeleteI think Bill has pretty well summed up my thoughts on these images as well.
What a fun assignment, It'd be fun to see the final results used in the magazing.
Keep up the great work.
flippin great! Love the composition of the last one.
ReplyDeletethe eyes roves nicely through it!